Mirror Miglactic

by: Courteney-Jade Gillespie
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http://www.pointingpurple.blogspot.com/

I enjoyed reading this comic, being a drama kid I can relate to it. You used Propps character functions and dramatis personae really well and made it work to your advantage. You also used Todorov’s principles of equilibrium, disruption, equilibrium, which created a better structured climax. It was interesting how you used the audience from another production in the piece. This was a very original and topical comic. I liked how you used an issue that everyone is talking about and exploited it to you benefit. You took this comic to another level and put more than the expected effort into it. Well done guys!!!!!!

By: Courteney-Jade Gillespie
from: http://www.fourhensandacock.blogspot.com/

Who new that poetry could define a man with a moustache in such a "musical" way. I read this piece and as your words graced my eyes images and an irritating, yet entertaining tune popped into my head. I enjoy how you have used Propp's form of 'Dramatis personae' in your writing and setting Garth as the hero of the moustache men. You have included the fundamental components of narrative, such as a constant stable piece of writing whereby each idea develops logically from the previous one. You have also included the Todorov status of the equilibrium. I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you.